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Reply Kokkoii-Matoku, February 14th, 2008, 8:41 am

LISTEN UP PLEASE! Hey Guyz.
Sorry >w<; for the HIATUS. i didn't want it to come to this but.
Being a first time manga-ka artist is really hard when you don't have ink pens >w<! and even if you do, there dieing. and i like it sorta in sketch but not really. i want really good works as pages.

My art is CHANGING. SO MUCHHHH. AND SATOU. does not LOOK CONSTANT.
Like she should.

I have to up my game and really make this a good manga >w< so please stay with me until i return.
I LOVE YOU GUYS! Please don't unfav me >w<! I SWEAR i'll come back LOOKING SO BETTER AND SPIFFY. you'll be like damn! XD!

Its funny how! I use a ruler yet it's still crooked.
I have to learn paneling and all the good steps it takes to make a manga.

I LOVE YOU ALL! ^^ I HOPE you welcome me back with open arms.

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Discussion:

Reply crimsonpearlvoice, February 15th, 2008, 9:43 am

Awww!
Get some more ink pens!
Go now!
:D
I will wait.
BUT I DON'T WANT TOO!
D:

Reply Kikirini, March 6th, 2008, 12:56 pm

Hey Koi. *waves*

So, I've been looking through your pages. The coloring effect on some parts is pretty cool.

You know, you don't need pens to do the lineart for your manga. XD If you sketch out lightly first, then draw the lineart much heavily on top of that with the same pencil, you can just darken the lines in PS (or have a friend with PS do it -- it takes two seconds). In short, there are ways to make it look like you've inked it.

I think something that it would benefit you to work on is your paneling. As it is, the panels are a little wonky, uneven, and sporadically placed. Panels generally should fit the page and considering the ton of full-body shots you use, you should have the panels behind your characters so it looks like they are popping out of the page. Straight line tools in art programs are generally handy.

I also think you may want to add some more backgrounds and do something other than fully forward shots on the characters. Changing up the view and perspective can really do wonders for your pages. :P

Hope that helps some. And I hope your computer stops acting up soon so I can give you PS and comicworks. XDD

Reply Kokkoii-Matoku, March 6th, 2008, 1:35 pm

Thank you so much Kikirini-chan!

^___^ I WILL TRY MY BEST! That's why i took this break to get better and come back better then evah!

Thankies!

Reply Natsumi-chan, April 30th, 2008, 7:28 pm

CUUUUTE! <3333

Reply Ally_Santra, June 13th, 2008, 7:55 am

Very nice! :D The soft hints of colour are really nice! <3

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